Friday, November 17, 2006

It's morning when you wake up!

It felt like it was going,
There wasn't a doubt in my knowing,
what did I do,
little did I have a clue.

my heart cries out in pain,
there is just one refrain,
please don't go,
I bow down low.

the mistake of five year,
to let people get near,
has cost me dear.

Am I so weak,
to let my self leak,
its time to correct,
and stand up erect.

time to move on,
from fun to none,
from crowded ways,
to those lonely days.

3 comments:

Akash said...

It felt like it was going,
my heart cries out in pain,
the mistake of five year,
Am I so weak,
time to move on

There wasn't a doubt in my knowing,
there is just one refrain,
to let people get near
to let my self leak,
from fun to none

What did I do,
please don't go,
its time to correct,
from crowded ways,

Little did I have a clue
I bow down low,
and stand up erect,
to those lonely days.

Brilliant buddy...initially I thought U have gone schizophrenic....and to verify it...I did this....and it sizzles ;-)

Shaheen said...

whoa!! i'm unable to decide what should i comment you on, M... on becoming a poet or on becoming a blogger!!

And A, that was absolutely brilliant!! particularly...

"I bow down low
and stand up erect"

just can't stop laughing... ;-))

Casey said...

Are you guys crazy? I just can't seem to think of anything to write! First R, then Kash and now you?!